Cautiously from above the newspaper I pretend to be reading, I watch her closely as she looks at herself in the mirror. She uses her index finger to pull at the corner of her eyes. She puffs her lips some, to see if the wrinkles around them iron out. They don’t. Thank God they don’t.
Those wrinkles are a testament, to all the times we have spent together. They are all the days we spent rearing our kids, who are now gone to be on their own. They are the sign of the love she has had for me, and that I have for her, even after all these years. Truth be told, I don’t remember how she looked when I first met her. Did she have a clear skin or acne? Did she always wear her hair this short? I don’t know. All I know is that this woman, the one who looks around to see me mock-reading the paper and peering at her from over it’s edge; this woman who still smiles at me like I was the best person in the world.. This is the way she has always looked most beautiful.
This post has been written for the Wednesday prompt-5 : She looked most beautiful on Write Tribe.
Wow …. Wat a take … you came up with something so soon and it is so so lovely…
Thanks Shiva! I must say, I got into overdrive with that lovely prompt! 🙂
Oh so lovely, Gauri! Yes, to our mothers we will always be most beautiful!
Thanks Corinne, it is the love of an old couple for each other 🙂
Oh! thats so sweet!! lovely!!
Thank you so much Nibha! 🙂
Superb !! As you were reading my post, I was here, reading yours… just too good 🙂 Don’t we all love the moms and grandmoms when they have the wrinkles, which actually speak more of their love for us !! Beautiful , Gauri 🙂 Loved it !!!
Sreeja, thanks for the lovely comment, it made my day 🙂 True, grand moms are irreplaceable. Now that my mom has become a grand mom twice over, I can see the mutual love and adoration between her and my daughters. It is a magical bond indeed 🙂
Lovely 🙂
Thanks Poornima! 🙂
Adorable post, love it. The beauty of a woman is timeless, especially in the eyes of those who love her.
Thank you Sulekha 🙂
awww! That was so sweet!! 🙂
thank you so so much! 🙂
Ah, this is such a lovely post. I love how he’s happy the wrinkles don’t wrinkle out. Love too that he’s mock-reading the paper and that she knows it.
Thank you Kelly 🙂
The wrinkles and the blemishes add to the beauty of the face thus enriching the soul.Beautiful take on the prompt,
Thank you so much Kalpana 🙂
Wow! She looks so beautiful and graceful. Loved your take on the prompt 🙂
Thanks Shilpa 🙂
This is such a beautiful write. So much love n warmth in those words. Absolutely adorable.
Thank you Rajlakshmi! 🙂
This is poignant and adorable at the same time. Loved the take!
Thank you Shailaja! 🙂
Gauri, this is a brilliant take on the prompt. The idea of pretending to read but in fact admiring her, is superb!
Thank you so much 🙂
Amazing the simple truth reflecting through… Enjoyed reading.
I am here: http://byastall.blogspot.in/2014/02/she-looked-most-beautiful-wednesday.html
Thanks Neelam 🙂
Beautiful tribute to love:)
Thank you Vishal 🙂
This is a very nice read Gauri 🙂
Thank you so much!
Beautiful post Gauri 🙂
thanks Sugandha 🙂
lovely! ❤
You can check mine here – http://dreamzandclouds.wordpress.com/2014/02/03/remembering-her/
thank you so much 🙂
Awwww the eternal love! ♡ ♡
something all of us seek, isn’t it?