The following post has been written for Write Tribe’s – 100 Words on Saturday 2014 – 5. The prompt was How do I tell her about you?
She tells me she hates your type,
She can’t stand to be anywhere near someone like you,
She tells me there is nothing to be loved about you.
How do I make her understand that you are my best friend,
That you have been with me forever,
That we grew up together,
That you spend most nights in my bed, cuddled next to me.
I know you are sad, and so am I,
Now I am in a dilemma, I love the both of you,
Tell me dear friend, How do I tell her about you?
awesome use of the prompt and also the post in itself.
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Aww….so cute! I’d choose the dog over her 😉
me too, me too… any day!n:-)
WOw…I loved this … so touching…
Thanks Pratikshya! 🙂
Such a cute take on the prompt…lovely
Thanks Sulekha! 🙂
aah so sweet 🙂 That was so perfectly worded , and such a cute pic 🙂 Lovely !
Thanks Sreeja! 🙂
Lovely post and great pic too.
Thank you Geeta 🙂
I would say beautifully written and profound words that goes deep in the heart. Well done, Gauri:)
thank you so much Vishal 🙂
The eternal battle over pets! A most engaging post, and I love the twist.
Oh! That’s sad. Some people cannot understand the love the pets and their owners share…
That’s a nice one for the prompt, Gauri 🙂
I still can’t convince my husband to get a dog. This was an indirect jab at him LOL 😛
So much of my feelings… wonderful post
Thanks Sugandha 🙂
oh, I love this ……beautiful post! 🙂
You can check mine here – http://dreamzandclouds.wordpress.com/2014/02/04/the-dilemma/
How adorable! What a cute take!
Thanks Shailaja 🙂
what a coincidence!!!! check this post to know what i mean.. http://archanaonline.com/2014/02/03/100-words-secrets/
hahahahaha!!
Dog days. So bad to leave this cuddle.
I miss my dogs too 😦
very heartfelt.very gud use of prompt..dxbnidblog
It’s a beautiful take on the prompt 🙂
Thank you Nabanita 🙂
Hope the other she will understand and fall in love with this one 🙂
They usually do na Bhavya! Except my husband. Strictly against getting a pet 😦
Bring home a pup/kitten and tell him a friend has asked you to keep it safe for a week till they return from a holiday or something. He would fall head over heels in love in a day or two I guess 😉
hahahaha I wish 😀 There’s only one problem… he can see right through me… I can’t lie to him 🙂
That’s the whole thing about these husbands 😛
A lovely take on the prompt.. 🙂
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A very amusing story but cute at the same time.Enjoyed reading it.
Thank you Sangeetha 🙂
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This is beautiful. Well done.
Thanks 🙂